# Do You Think Facebook Ads Don’t Work?
*Originally published on Copywriters.com on September 21, 2022. Written by Deborah E. Landry. Republished on Introvert Marketers with updates for today’s digital advertising landscape.*
## Here’s How Advertisers Use High-Converting Facebook Ad Copy to Generate Real Sales
**Do you ever wonder why some people are able to write high-converting Facebook ad copy, yet others fail miserably?**
Probably the most obvious difference between these two types of people would be knowledge, or lack of it.
Those who succeed understand certain marketing principles that others may overlook.
And although Facebook advertising has changed considerably over the years, understanding your audience and knowing how to communicate with them remains just as important.
Would you like to understand what successful advertisers do differently?
If so, this article is for you!
When advertising on Facebook, it’s critical to understand the problems, concerns, and desires of your ideal customer or prospect.
In the marketing world, this person is also known as your “buyer persona” or “avatar.”
Once you understand who you’re speaking to, the next step is knowing what to say to them.
This may seem obvious, but it’s critically important to understand this concept before you ever get started.
What you say is typically referred to as your “message” or “copywriting.”
In advertising, a familiar phrase is **message-to-market match.**
This means putting the right message in front of the right audience at the right time.
When these elements work together, you improve your chances of generating leads and sales.
Of course, even the best message can’t guarantee that someone will buy.
But understanding your audience gives you a much better starting point.
### Finding the Right Audience
Facebook, now part of Meta, offers advertisers several ways to reach prospective customers.
These include audience targeting, Custom Audiences, Lookalike Audiences, and AI-assisted advertising tools.
For example, if you have an established customer audience, you may be able to create a Custom Audience using information collected and shared in accordance with applicable privacy requirements and Meta’s terms.
You may also be able to create Lookalike Audiences to reach people who share characteristics with your existing customers.
Meta’s Advantage+ tools can help advertisers identify potential audiences using automated systems.
However, targeting options have changed over time, and not every audience feature is available for every campaign.
Certain advertising categories also have additional restrictions.
The important thing is to understand that Meta’s advertising system can help you reach potential buyers, but it doesn’t replace the need for good copywriting.
You still need to figure out your message.
To write high-converting Facebook ad copy, you need to understand several important concepts.
## Number One: Research Your Buyer Persona
Different copywriting strategies exist that you can use to speak to your ideal buyer.
One of the most common approaches is to understand your prospect’s problems and concerns.
What problem does your prospect have that your product or service can solve?
How can you explain that problem in a way that makes sense to them?
And how can you demonstrate that your offer provides a useful solution?
Traditionally, copywriters have used a strategy called Problem-Agitate-Solution, or PAS.
This involves identifying a problem, explaining its consequences, and presenting a solution.
However, you don’t have to frighten people or exaggerate their difficulties to make this approach effective.
In fact, ethical marketing is often more persuasive because it builds trust.
To understand the problems your buyers face, go where they spend time online and listen to what they have to say.
What questions are they asking?
What frustrates them?
What are they hoping to accomplish?
The better you understand their concerns, the more effectively you can communicate.
If you have an existing list of customers, have you surveyed them?
Have you asked what they’re looking for?
Directly asking customers what they want and need can give you a wealth of information.
And here’s something important.
When writing Facebook advertisements, avoid language that suggests you know sensitive personal information about the individual reading your ad.
Meta has specific rules about personal attributes, including health, financial circumstances, religion, and other characteristics.
You can discuss a problem or explain how your product helps without implying that you know something private about the person viewing your advertisement.
## Number Two: Research Your Competitors
Next, what are your competitors doing?
What types of advertisements are they showing to the same general audience you’re trying to reach?
One useful resource is the Meta Ad Library.
You can use it to research advertisements that businesses are currently running.
What are they talking about?
Which headlines and curiosity hooks are they using?
How are they positioning their products?
What benefits are they emphasizing?
And how can you position your own message in a way that stands out?
Here’s a tip.
If an advertisement has been running for a long time, it may be worth studying.
That doesn’t necessarily prove it’s profitable, but it can provide clues about the advertiser’s approach.
Can you come up with a similar marketing angle while creating something genuinely original?
Do your competitors have organic posts or blog articles you can read?
Have you studied their websites and sales funnels?
Do you understand how they’re guiding prospective buyers from the initial advertisement to the final offer?
The goal isn’t to copy your competitors.
It’s to understand the marketplace and identify ways your business can offer something valuable and different.
Remember, your competition is only a click away.
## Number Three: Set Up Your Metrics
Do you know what your conversion numbers need to be for your advertising campaign to turn a profit?
These measurements are commonly called **Key Performance Indicators**, or KPIs.
If you don’t know your numbers, it’s difficult to determine whether your advertising is actually working.
These indicators measure important information about each step of your marketing campaign.
For example, if someone sees your advertisement on Facebook, you may want to know how many people click on it.
But more importantly, how many people take the next step?
How many visit your landing page?
How many subscribe to your email list?
And how many eventually become paying customers?
Some important metrics include:
– Click-through rate (CTR)
– Cost per click (CPC)
– Cost per lead (CPL)
– Conversion rate
– Customer acquisition cost (CAC)
– Return on ad spend (ROAS)
Not every campaign needs to focus on every metric.
The important thing is to choose measurements that reflect your actual business goals.
After all, an advertisement that receives thousands of clicks but produces no sales may not be doing your business much good.
And remember, revenue isn’t the same thing as profit.
You need to consider advertising costs, product expenses, fees, refunds, and other business expenses when evaluating your results.
## Number Four: Create Your High-Converting Facebook Ad Copy
Once you’ve figured out your audience, message, and metrics, it’s time to create your advertisement.
The first thing you need to do is **GRAB THEIR ATTENTION!**
And you need to do it in an effective and compliant way.
One of the best ways to grab attention is with a strong headline and an interesting image or video.
Remember, you have only a few seconds to get people to stop scrolling and pay attention.
The job of the image or video is to catch their interest.
The headline should encourage them to learn more.
And the next sentence should give them a reason to keep reading.
All the way down what seasoned marketers call the “slippery slide.”
One thing needs to lead naturally to another in an entertaining, educational, and informative way.
### Understand What Your Audience Wants
A good place to start is by identifying five or ten questions, problems, or goals that matter to your audience.
Take time to brainstorm these.
What are they trying to accomplish?
What obstacles are standing in their way?
How does your offer help?
Remember to center your message around what your prospect values rather than simply listing everything your product contains.
### Understand the Role of Emotion
Most experienced copywriters understand that emotions influence purchasing decisions.
People may feel excited about an opportunity, concerned about making a mistake, or hopeful that a product will solve a problem.
But emotion doesn’t eliminate the importance of logic.
Buyers also consider price, credibility, usefulness, and whether a product fits their circumstances.
Your job is to communicate both the emotional and practical benefits of your offer.
### Use Storytelling
One of the best ways to do this is through stories.
Marketers who communicate effectively often understand how to tell a compelling story.
A good story can help people recognize a situation, understand a problem, and imagine a possible solution.
And storytelling doesn’t require you to appear on camera.
You can use narration, illustrations, stock footage, animations, screen recordings, or other faceless video formats.
If you’re using video, consider adding captions.
Many people watch videos on mobile devices without sound.
Captions can make your message easier to understand and more accessible.
Whether you’re using images, videos, or written advertisements, your message should be clear and relevant.
## Number Five: Do You Know How Sophisticated Your Audience Is?
The longer a specific product or service has been on the market, the more promises your audience has probably heard.
An audience that’s been exposed to numerous advertisements and competing claims may become more skeptical.
In copywriting, this concept is known as **market sophistication**.
For example, consider cell phones.
When mobile phones first became available, simply owning one was a major selling point.
But as more companies entered the market, manufacturers needed to explain why their phones were different.
Today, consumers compare cameras, battery life, software, features, pricing, and many other factors.
The same principle applies to digital marketing products and online business opportunities.
If your audience has seen dozens of programs promising similar benefits, why should they pay attention to yours?
What makes your offer different?
What evidence supports your claims?
And why should they trust you?
The more skeptical your audience becomes, the more important it is to communicate clearly and demonstrate genuine value.
You don’t necessarily need a louder message.
You need a more credible one.
## Number Six: Level of Awareness
How aware is your audience of the problem your product solves?
This is another important concept in marketing psychology.
Different buyers have different levels of awareness.
Some may not recognize that a particular problem exists.
Others know they have a problem but haven’t researched solutions.
Some understand the available solutions but aren’t familiar with your product.
And others already know about your offer and simply need additional information before making a decision.
For example, imagine someone who’s having difficulty creating marketing videos.
At first, they may assume that appearing on camera is their only option.
Then they discover that faceless videos are possible.
Next, they begin researching tools that can help them create those videos.
Eventually, they compare specific software programs and training options.
Each stage requires a different marketing message.
Someone who’s just discovering faceless marketing may need education.
Someone who’s already comparing video-editing software may want demonstrations, pricing information, and product comparisons.
And someone who’s ready to purchase may simply want to know what the offer includes.
Understanding awareness levels helps you communicate with buyers according to what they already know.
## Number Seven: Is Your Ad Facebook Compliant?
One important element that can distinguish an effective Facebook advertising campaign from an unsuccessful one is compliance.
It’s critical for your business to become familiar with Meta’s advertising policies.
And this is an area where advertising has changed considerably over the years.
Some traditional copywriting techniques can create compliance problems when they’re used irresponsibly.
For example, exaggerated promises, sensational claims, and aggressive statements about personal problems may violate Meta’s rules.
The more unrealistic the expectations and promises, the greater the risk of creating a misleading advertisement.
A good rule of thumb is to genuinely want to help people.
Remember, these are real people.
Your business and products need to be ethical, legitimate, and authentic.
### Understand Meta’s Point of View
To understand compliance, consider the advertising platform’s responsibilities.
People use Facebook and Instagram to connect with others, discover information, and enjoy content.
Advertisements that are misleading, disruptive, or inappropriate can interfere with that experience.
That’s one reason Meta maintains advertising standards.
Privacy is another important consideration.
Advertisers must be careful about how they collect and use personal information.
They also need to understand restrictions involving sensitive personal attributes.
For example, an advertisement shouldn’t imply that the advertiser knows someone’s private medical condition or financial situation.
### What Happens When an Ad Is Rejected?
Meta may reject advertisements that violate its policies.
In some circumstances, advertising accounts or business assets may also be restricted.
But here’s something important.
**Even experienced advertisers can encounter rejected ads or account restrictions.**
Understanding the rules can reduce compliance risks, but it doesn’t guarantee approval.
And advertising policies can change.
That’s why it’s important to review the official [Meta Advertising Standards](https://transparency.meta.com/policies/ad-standards/) rather than relying entirely on older tutorials.
If an advertisement is rejected, review the stated reason and follow the available correction or review process.
Knowing what to say, what not to say, and how to present an offer responsibly is an important part of effective copywriting.
## Number Eight: What Are Reasons Your Prospect May NOT Want to Buy?
Whenever a prospect faces a decision to buy or not buy a product, they often have questions that need answers.
And sometimes they have perfectly reasonable reasons for deciding not to purchase.
A good copywriter needs to understand these concerns.
Do they think your product is too expensive?
How can you help them understand its value?
Do they need to speak with a spouse or business partner?
Are they having trouble believing or trusting your claims?
Do they think they can wait and possibly buy at a later date?
Are they afraid of making a mistake?
Are they concerned that they won’t be able to use the product successfully?
These and other objections should be addressed throughout the sales process.
How can you offer proof?
Do you have genuine testimonials?
What support is available?
Is there a refund policy or guarantee?
The goal isn’t to pressure people into buying something they don’t need.
It’s to provide enough accurate information for them to make an informed decision.
And sometimes the right decision for a prospect is not to buy.
That’s okay!
Building trust is more important than forcing a sale.
## Number Nine: Your Call to Action
Once you’ve gotten your prospect to read your message, you need to give them a clear call to action.
What should they do next?
This depends on your business model because each model is different.
For example, an e-commerce advertisement might lead someone to a product page.
A webinar advertisement might lead to a registration page.
And an information product advertisement might lead to a sales page or educational presentation.
The important thing is that your call to action makes sense.
If you’re offering a free guide, tell people how to receive it.
If you’re inviting them to watch a demonstration, make that next step clear.
And if you’re promoting a paid product, don’t mislead them about the price or what they’ll receive.
Another important consideration is landing-page relevance.
Wherever you’re sending people needs to match the advertisement they clicked.
That should be obvious, but businesses sometimes make this mistake.
Whatever you’re discussing in your advertisement, the destination page should have a consistent message.
Your prospect should immediately understand that they’ve arrived at the right place.
## Number Ten: Your Follow-Up Funnel
Once your prospect leaves your advertisement and enters a series of marketing steps, this is commonly called a “funnel.”
Following up can be important because not everyone is ready to purchase immediately.
Some people need additional information.
Others want to compare options.
And some may simply need more time.
A follow-up system gives you opportunities to answer questions, provide helpful resources, and maintain communication.
For example, someone who downloads a free guide might receive an email sequence containing additional tips.
A person who registers for a webinar might receive reminders and follow-up resources.
And a customer who purchases a product might receive onboarding instructions and relevant support.
Again, this will vary depending on your business model.
As you can imagine, selling a $10 necklace requires a different customer journey than selling a $5,000 professional training program.
Your follow-up process should reflect the complexity and value of the offer.
And don’t forget to respect people’s communication preferences.
If someone subscribes to your email list, be clear about what they’re signing up for and provide an appropriate way to unsubscribe.
Good follow-up marketing should feel helpful, not intrusive.
## Number Eleven: Retargeting Your Audience
One of the advertising strategies Facebook became well known for is retargeting.
You may have wondered, “How does that work?”
Traditionally, one of the main tools involved was the Facebook Pixel, now called the **Meta Pixel**.
The Meta Pixel helps businesses measure certain actions visitors take on their websites.
Meta also offers the Conversions API, which can help businesses share eligible conversion events through server-based connections.
Depending on your setup, these tools may help you understand actions such as page visits, registrations, or purchases.
### How Retargeting Works
Imagine someone visits your website and looks at a product but doesn’t purchase.
Under appropriate conditions, you may be able to show a relevant advertisement to that visitor later.
Or perhaps someone has already purchased from you.
You might want to introduce them to a complementary product or service.
These are examples of retargeting and customer audience strategies.
However, privacy requirements, consent settings, platform restrictions, and browser limitations affect what data can be collected and used.
Not every visitor can be tracked or retargeted.
And some sensitive data cannot be used for advertising audiences.
### What About Your Funnel’s Leakage Points?
In marketing, people who leave a funnel before completing the desired action are sometimes referred to as “leakage points.”
Kind of like the boy or girl who got away!
But here’s something important.
Not every person who leaves your funnel needs to be chased around the internet with more advertisements.
Sometimes they simply aren’t interested.
Other times, your offer may not be the right fit.
Use your analytics to understand where people lose interest and whether your message, page design, pricing, or offer needs improvement.
Retargeting can be useful, but it should be done responsibly.
And remember that your campaign still needs to stay within your established KPIs.
If a campaign is profitable and performing consistently, avoid making unnecessary changes without a good reason.
If performance declines, investigate what changed before making adjustments.
## Number Twelve: Scaling a Profitable Campaign
Last, but certainly not least, once you have a profitable advertising campaign, you may want to scale it.
In other words, you want to reach more potential customers while maintaining acceptable results.
Here are a few ways advertisers may attempt to scale a campaign:
– Gradually increase the advertising budget.
– Test additional images or videos.
– Experiment with different headlines and messages.
– Explore broader or additional eligible audiences.
– Improve landing-page conversion rates.
– Test new offers or creative approaches.
But here’s something important.
**Increasing your advertising budget doesn’t automatically mean you’ll increase your profits.**
As your campaign reaches more people, your costs and conversion rates may change.
That’s why you need to keep monitoring your KPIs.
Don’t assume that a campaign that worked with a small budget will perform exactly the same way with a much larger one.
Test your changes and pay attention to the results.
And, of course, continue following Meta’s advertising policies.
The last thing you want is to build a successful campaign only to encounter avoidable problems with misleading claims or prohibited advertising practices.
## In Summary
If you want to create high-converting Facebook ad copy, you need to understand the strategies that influence purchasing decisions.
But even more importantly, you need to know when and how to use those strategies responsibly.
Research your audience.
Understand your competitors.
Know your numbers.
Write compelling headlines.
Use storytelling.
Consider market sophistication and buyer awareness.
Address objections.
And always provide a clear next step.
Most importantly, remember that effective marketing isn’t about manipulating people.
It’s about understanding what they need, communicating honestly, and offering something that genuinely helps them.
Facebook advertising can be one way to reach prospective customers.
But these copywriting principles apply far beyond Facebook.
You can use them in blog articles, email marketing, YouTube videos, landing pages, and other forms of online marketing.
You don’t have to rely on a single advertising platform to build a successful marketing strategy.
And you certainly don’t have to abandon your values to become a better marketer.
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*Editor’s Note: This article was originally published on Copywriters.com in 2022. It has been updated to reflect changes in Meta’s advertising platform, targeting tools, tracking technology, and advertising policies while preserving the original 12-part structure and core copywriting principles.*
